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            In Herman Melville’s “Bartleby, the Scrivener” we are introduced to the title character by an elderly narrator who crossed paths with the “scrivener”. Through the narrator, a lawyer from Wall Street, the reader is given insight into Bartleby’s story and his oft use of the phrase “I would prefer not to” (27). From his first introduction, Bartleby is somewhat of an enigma, the narrator describing his first impression, “a motionless young man one morning stood upon my office threshold… pallidly neat, pitiably respectable, incurably forlorn!” (25). However, little is known about Bartleby, the narrator himself stating that “Bartleby was one of those beings of whom nothing is ascertainable, except from the original sources, and, in his case, those are very small” (20). Knowing so little about Bartleby, the question arises as to why the narrator chooses to tell Bartleby’s story. Does the narrator really come to know who Bartleby is and what he represents? What does he represent? Does he represent nothing? In this case, does representing nothing mean something? Amidst all the questions however, what Bartleby represents to himself is irrelevant. Bartleby’s whole history is something the narrator and readers alike will never know.  So what makes a man of whom which little is known so important that an elderly lawyer decides that he must share what he knows of Bartleby and insists that the things unknown about him “is an irreparable loss to literature” (20)? Although the question of who Bartleby is remains, Bartleby’s importance is not rooted in his own gauge of himself, but rather what he means to those who cross paths with him.
            The elderly narrator makes a conscious decision to tell the tale of Wall Street, not through the stories of many scriveners who he worked with for extended periods of time during his career, but rather through a scrivener, of whom in comparison to others, he had little interactions with. Though only having worked with Bartleby for a short period of time, what sets him apart from the others is the way that he challenges the narrator’s faith in society.  In an article by Todd F. Davis, aptly titled “The Narrator’s Dilemma”, the author states that “It is Bartleby's lack of productivity that begins the narrator's journey into a strange world he has never cared to know… The entrance of Bartleby and his refusal to do the tasks set before him force the narrator to question his past rules for living.”  Bartleby first appears as an efficient worker, having done “an extraordinary quantity of writing” (26). However, once prodded “to verify the accuracy of his copy, word by word”, Bartleby does the unthinkable, firmly replying “I would prefer not to” (27). As much as this unsettles the narrator, he also finds that “there was something about Bartleby that not only strangely disarmed me, but in a wonderful manner, touched and disconcerted me” (28). Bartleby’s irreversible stance on doing more work provokes the narrator to question his stance on society informed conduct, “It is not seldom the case that, when a man is browbeaten in some unprecedented and violently unreasonable way, he begins to stagger in his own plainest faith.” (28).  By simply refusing to give an expected reply, Bartleby effectively challenges the very strict rules of conduct that narrator has clung to.
Evening on Karl Johan Street (1892), Edvard Munch. Bergen Art Museum, Norway.
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            What makes Bartleby so important is that he serves as a mirror to world, the reflection of which shows the horrors of modernity. In the painting “Evening on Karl Johan Street” by Edvard Munch, one immediately sees an image of a community walking one direction, and a mysterious enigma, a lone mysterious man, walking resolutely in the opposite direction.  Melville’s Bartleby undoubtedly fits this description of the lone man walking away from the crowd, whilst the crowd may well be the lawyer, the other scriveners, and everyone else Bartleby encounters.  In the foreground, we see a crowd walking with eyes round and trance like, as if under the spell of modern society.  Each person walking either shares a similar transfixed expression, or is worse, completely faceless, in both cases they are no longer individuals.  The man’s face walking in the opposite direction also cannot be seen.  Just like Bartleby however, it is not so much who he is to himself, but rather what he means to the crowd.  Much like Bartleby, little is known about the man, other than he doesn’t fit into society; hence he walks to a different rhythm, ultimately walking in a different direction.  If someone in the crowd were to spot this mysterious figure, he might just stop walking, finding himself intrigued, and yet perplexed by the man walking in the opposite direction, ultimately questioning his own.  Therein lies Bartleby’s importance, especially to the narrator.  Bartleby’s power is that he is able to show the narrator a reflection of a man struggling to fit in and blindingly following society’s direction towards modernity. 
            Although Melville’s work is titled “Bartleby, The Scrivener”, the importance of the story is not so much what happens to Bartleby from beginning to end, but rather how the narrator himself reacts to whole of Bartleby’s story. Bartleby challenges the very societal traditions and norms the narrator has clung to prior to meeting Bartleby. After each failed attempt to coerce Bartleby is some form action, the narrator each time relies on his own routine, to comfort him against the perplexed state Bartleby leaves him. In “Bartleby the Socratic” by Andre Furlani, the author writes that when the narrator is faced with Bartleby’s passive aggressive replies, “ The inveterate habit of fleeing into habit or domestic comfort becomes his only recourse, since he refuses either to dismiss Bartleby or bravely to face the self-examination that the scrivener's conduct compels.” Although the narrator finds himself compelled and riveted by Bartleby’s story, the urgent need to hold on to his own traditions and justifying Bartleby’s withdrawal from society becomes even stronger.
            As Bartleby’s story comes to an end, the narrator still finds himself drawn towards Bartleby. The discovery of a wasted Bartleby, dead and having died alone, results in the narrator acknowledging that when he goes to feels Bartleby’s hand, “a tingling shiver ran up my arm and down my spine to my feet.” (49). Andre Furlani, notes that “At this point the reader might expect the story to move toward a quite different resolution--the attorney awakened to a sense of his own presumption, his ignorance, and to a sense that insights issue from there. He appears to have reached the apex of his crisis… Yet, with the growing realization of ignorance comes its anodyne: a "prudential feeling" of melancholy merging into fear, of pity into revulsion, as well as a cogent psychological rationalization for such a feeling.” In fact, the narrator finds himself compelled to “divulge one little item of rumor… that Bartleby had been a subordinate clerk in the Dead Letter Office at Washington,” (50), justifying that perhaps Bartleby’s quick path towards solidarity and death was spurred on by his experience working there.  Rather than admit that society has not been kind to Bartleby, he instead justifies Bartleby’s failure to thrive due to a past occupation.  In essence, though shown a different path and challenging his way of thinking and living by Bartleby, the narrator instead finds himself regressing, opting, preferring, not to act.
            “Bartleby, the Scrivener” although humorous at times, is ultimately a tragic tale. On the surface, one might feel pity towards Bartleby, but upon deeper reflection, the pity falls on the narrator.  Bartleby, though not necessarily exceptional, is special in that he’s able to challenge and bring to light the flaws of modernity and society.  The tragedy however, is that the narrator, who seems to have been brought into the light by Bartleby himself, blatantly refuses to acknowledge this, opting to not make change simply because he would prefer not to. The brilliance of Melville’s work however, is that he allows the reader to take this journey with the narrator and Bartleby. Ultimately, Melville doesn’t ask us to choose either the narrator or Bartleby’s path, rather he leaves the reader the choice to reflect, look inside, and ask whether preferring not to is enough.




Works Cited:
Melville, Herman. "Bartleby, the Scrivener. A Story of Wall Street." Literature: A Portable      Anthology. Ed. Janet E. Gardner et al 2nd Ed. Boston: Bedford, 2009. 20-50. Print.

Davis, Todd F. "The Narrator's Dilemma In "Bartleby The Scrivener": The Excellently             Illustrated Re-Statement Of A Problem." Studies In Short Fiction 34.2 (1997): 183.  Academic Search Premier. Web. 14 May 2012.

Furlani, Andre. "Bartleby The Socratic." Studies In Short Fiction 34.3 (1997): 335. MasterFILE          Premier. Web. 14 May 2012.